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Stinky Twinkie
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since 2002-11-26
Posts 204
Dinwiddie

0 posted 2005-02-12 10:13 PM


Well, it's been a good while since I've been here. Here's some new craziness from the Stink Twink.

"Peanut Butter Reptile"

It's a flippy dippy
sugar coated candy wax
peanut butter reptile
an orange and a stepchild
underneath the cataracts

But underneath the plaster pastor
is a flow chart about disaster,
left big toes, and who knows
but the Peanut Butter Reptile, the true master.


-Stinky Twinkie likes peanut butter.-

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Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
1 posted 2005-02-14 11:50 AM


thats f'ing awesome! the meaning is so obscure. but its so original, man!
WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044
...Coming to
2 posted 2005-02-15 09:02 PM


I find it incredibly amusing that I was actually eating peanut butter when I got on this site, and there was your title.
Another good write as always, I love the end.

If I could fall asleep tonight
you know I’d dream of you
and wake up wondering
why my heart is so cold
~WinterWren~

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3 posted 2005-02-15 09:41 PM


Awesome write, the ending seems like a smack in the face... I love the rhyme and the flow is great.

an orange and a stepchild
underneath the cataracts


Poignant.  Thanks for the read.  

*Jennifer

((behind this fuzzy haze I can see that we are coffee and milk mixed, perfect, but not for everyone.))

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