»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #7
»
MY LOVE ONCE
| Teen Poetry #7 |
|
MY LOVE ONCE |
|
|
red_angel*16 Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 71 |
"My Love Once" The day I met you I didn't know what was ahead After I heard what you thought about me I never could forget you I never thought I'd find someone I had no clue that one day you'd be mine. After half a year I still remembered you Who knew I could make someone loud become as quiet as me You wanted to be with me Even though you had a little help I was finally with someone who cared(and the person I'd been waiting for) When I was finally with you I didn't want the moment to end You were everything I wanted You were perfect! I loved you and you loved me. The moment we kissed I couldn't believe it I never wanted it to end But sadly it had to I just didn't know that later We would too. The day you broke my heart I didn't think I could go on You were actually gone and I didn't know why I still wanted you here with me I will never forget you(one day I will) You made me want to die(not anymore) But you were my love... once. |
||
| © Copyright 2005 red_angel*16 - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
omg.... this is beautiful and so amazing, and about time we saw you posting again.. keep them coming Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
||
*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Another awesome write! I can relate to this so much. This poem is going in my library for sure.  Keep Posting!  ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
||
|
Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
Wow, I am sorry that someone broke your heart.. It was an awesome poem Jezzika you know he really wants me |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
