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Teen Poetry #7

[swan]

Android 17

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since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

0 posted 2005-02-12 05:26 AM

       ... infestation ...
                      ... they try to kommit ...

... walking circles ...
            ... they are only fooling themselves ...

                 ... self attempt ...              ... with the fraction of a doubt ...
              ... it's real ...
    ... thinking they're unst0ppable ...

            ... they are only fooling themselves ...

             ... misguided thoughts ...
             ... misplaced thoughts ...
    ... drowning themselves ...

   ... swimming spastik waters ...
                ... two and two ...
... one and one ...
       ... single swan ...
                        ... it knows best ...

            ... i am only fooling myself ...

Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

1 posted 2005-02-12 12:10 PM

Hmm, It seems that you also have quite a bit on your mind. I'm always here for you if you need a shoulder, or a pair of ears to listen, or sometimes a good hug.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2005-02-12 03:40 PM

I love the layout you used in this poem.
I'm here too, if you ever want to talk.

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

3 posted 2005-03-04 01:31 PM

A great read.

Andrew

Android 17

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since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

4 posted 2005-03-05 05:50 AM

Thanks man! I appreciate it!

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