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0 posted 2005-02-27 10:32 PM


Time slips through my fingers,
And washes away in the wind.
Standing in this realm of darkness,
I don't know where to begin.

I'll never forget how I got here,
Or where it is I want to be.
Finding stregnth to fight the greatest rival,
Who just so happens to be me.

A taste my memories;
The faint aroma in the air.
Change is occuring,
Everyone better beware.

The winds of change are coming,
Voices of the past are screaming.
So untill it becomes present,
I guess I'll be stuck merely dreaming.

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'Bitta "normal" poetry for y'all. Abit shoddy, but it's the best way I can put my thoughts to paper.

© Copyright 2005 Alex-lee Hryhorczuk - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-02-28 12:55 PM


"I'll never forget how I got here,
Or where it is I want to be.
Finding stregnth to fight the greatest rival,
Who just so happens to be me."

Wow, this part was awesome.  The poem seemed very dark.....I thought it was great!  


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2 posted 2005-02-28 07:36 PM


Thanks Jezz!

Yeah, it was meant to be rather dark. In fact, all of my stuff tends to be...

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3 posted 2005-03-02 03:48 PM


I really like your writing Alex though I think that it would really benefit from being spell checked. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us and keep on writing.

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4 posted 2005-03-05 05:50 AM


Hehe, noted.
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