Teen Poetry #7 |
Darkness |
Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Time slips through my fingers, And washes away in the wind. Standing in this realm of darkness, I don't know where to begin. I'll never forget how I got here, Or where it is I want to be. Finding stregnth to fight the greatest rival, Who just so happens to be me. A taste my memories; The faint aroma in the air. Change is occuring, Everyone better beware. The winds of change are coming, Voices of the past are screaming. So untill it becomes present, I guess I'll be stuck merely dreaming. ----- 'Bitta "normal" poetry for y'all. Abit shoddy, but it's the best way I can put my thoughts to paper. |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
"I'll never forget how I got here, Or where it is I want to be. Finding stregnth to fight the greatest rival, Who just so happens to be me." Wow, this part was awesome. The poem seemed very dark.....I thought it was great! |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Thanks Jezz! Yeah, it was meant to be rather dark. In fact, all of my stuff tends to be... |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I really like your writing Alex though I think that it would really benefit from being spell checked. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us and keep on writing. Andrew |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Hehe, noted. |
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