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Teen Poetry #7

Lifes Web

WranglrButts9
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since 2004-10-24

Posts 108
Iowa, US

0 posted 2005-01-22 04:30 PM

Life’s Web
I lay on my bed
Looking up at the corners
Of my square room
They’re filled with cob webs,
Showing a bugs lost life.

How can this
Have anything to do with me?
I’ve been caught in a web,
For the last 2 months,
Stuck in the goo,
Unable to move
Struggling and tiring,
Every new day brings
Another cob web battle.

I’ll eventually just give up,
Though I don’t want to…
My life will be lost,
I’ve put forth all energy,
And there isn’t an ounce left.

Just like the bugs,
I’m caught in a web,
Though this one is the web of
Life!

I dont really know if I like this, but it is what it is, lol. Tell me what you think and if it makes sense at all...

Bailey

Good judgment comes from experience,
and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

1 posted 2005-01-22 11:37 PM

I denfinatley like this!!!! It's REALLY good! Yanno I love all of your stuff.

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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