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peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

0 posted 2005-01-18 04:07 PM

Just smile knowing tomorrow will come
whether or not you want it to.
Frown knowing tomorrow won't be yesterday.
Cut the pain and swallow your screams
as you fade into nothing.
Regret on your tongue not allowing a simple apology escape from your voice.
Just believe
in what was never meant to be.
Reflecting stains shine upon your heaving chest
attempting to mutter one word as your heart melts away.
Don't assume there is no help.
There surely is but none is or will be offered.
A sorry being does not deserve to breathe
another ounce of life
possessing only sin and deceit.
I think I wrote this in September but I'm not sure. Let me know what ya think!

"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is to love, and be loved in return" -Moulin Rouge

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

1 posted 2005-01-19 09:49 PM

quote:
Frown knowing tomorrow won't be yesterday.
Cut the pain and swallow your screams

loved those lines....

<33
ri

no matter what i'll always love you
i swear

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

2 posted 2005-01-20 09:19 PM

This was great Jess...My fav. part was -

"Just believe
in what was never meant to be.
Reflecting stains shine upon your heaving chest
attempting to mutter one word as your heart melts away."

Good job Homie.

"Cuz I'm broken, when I'm lonesome, and I don't feel right when you're gone away..."~ Seether

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2005-01-21 09:42 PM

This is so amazing! I tried to pick a favorite line, but all of them were equally good! Im really really loving this one alot!!
This is going in my library.

If I could fall asleep tonight
you know I’d dream of you
and wake up wondering
why my heart is so cold
~WinterWren~

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

4 posted 2005-01-23 05:18 PM

Thank you so much for the comments! You guys have no idea how much I appreciate them!

"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is to love, and be loved in return" -Moulin Rouge

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2005-01-23 11:20 PM

Great write Jessica! Your poems just get better and better.

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

6 posted 2005-01-24 12:45 PM

"Just smile knowing tomorrow will come
whether or not you want it to.
Frown knowing tomorrow won't be yesterday."

i loved that part!
laura

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

7 posted 2005-01-24 01:34 AM

Deffinately something different! The first two lines were my favorites, but I'll resist the urge to quote. 0.o;; <-- me resisting..lol
As for telling you what I think, well, I have to say, that... I really liked it!

See Ya!

Rich

Winamp Is Playing:
"Change"
Staind
Break The Cycle

"I am a part of the world that I hate/I wish the end would come faster, my world's a distaster," - Crossfade "Starless"

Jezzika
Member

since 2005-01-05

Posts 154
work

8 posted 2005-01-27 10:04 AM

Wow... I loved this poem it was awesome..

Jezzika

you know he really wants me

Toasty
Member

since 2003-06-09

Posts 74
my little hole in wisconsin

9 posted 2005-01-27 04:01 PM

I..WOW... just wow.
This is going into my library.

~toasty

"Nothing is so strong as gentleness; Nothing so gentle as real strength." -Francis de Sales.

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