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Teen Poetry #7

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Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2005-01-17 09:44 PM

Life leaves me,
Just as my love,
Whom I have lost,
The one who knew me,

I would die many times,
If I could wash my sins,
And get a day to be with her,
Hold her and kiss her,

A fork in the road,
One with a great future,
And no love,
No happiness left now,

Sadness creeps in,
Leaving my mind in shambles,
My heart quivers,
Obsessed I have become,
Reminiscing my old love.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

I_dont_know_me
Junior Member

since 2003-12-08

Posts 48
UK, Cymru

1 posted 2005-01-20 06:21 AM

i like i like

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2005-01-21 09:45 PM

I really love the last stanza. I can really relate to that. Excellent work.
Thanks for sharing.

If I could fall asleep tonight
you know I’d dream of you
and wake up wondering
why my heart is so cold
~WinterWren~

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