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0 posted 2005-01-17 09:44 PM



Life leaves me,
Just as my love,
Whom I have lost,
The one who knew me,

I would die many times,
If I could wash my sins,
And get a day to be with her,
Hold her and kiss her,

A fork in the road,
One with a great future,
And no love,
No happiness left now,

Sadness creeps in,
Leaving my mind in shambles,
My heart quivers,
Obsessed I have become,
Reminiscing my old love.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-01-20 06:21 AM


i like i like
WinterWren
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2 posted 2005-01-21 09:45 PM


I really love the last stanza. I can really relate to that. Excellent work.
Thanks for sharing.

If I could fall asleep tonight
you know I’d dream of you
and wake up wondering
why my heart is so cold
~WinterWren~

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