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Teen Poetry #7

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Savage Quiescence
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since 2002-07-29

Posts 326
Wandering

0 posted 2005-01-21 06:19 PM

Dispel the insecurities
that keep me at bay.
My fears no longer restrain me
I won't waste Today.
Always waited for tomorrow
but it never came.
I kept playing by your rules
trapped inside the game.
You thought you had me figured out
but I have learned your art.
You thought I'd be your courtesan
but I won't play that part.
Surely there is something better
than what I've been reduced to.
Like the wind, the rain, the sunshine-
I don't belong to you.

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I know, I know, bleh, another rant poem. But at least they keep the juices flowin'.

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*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

1 posted 2005-01-21 07:40 PM

It's ok to rant...just good to get all your feelings out.

You have livejournal! That's cool. I just got one the other day...lol.

Anyways...nice write!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2005-01-21 11:15 PM

"Like the wind, the rain, the sunshine-
I don't belong to you"

oh you have NO idea how much I love that last bit!!! Awesome poem...one I will be keeping thank you.

Savage Quiescence
Member

since 2002-07-29

Posts 326
Wandering

3 posted 2005-01-22 12:05 PM

Thank you both for replying, it is much appreciated. The last two lines are my favorite, too, and a bit of revolution came when they formed onto paper. I'm glad you enjoyed

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