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Suede
Junior Member
since 2003-08-25
Posts 38
Drifting on the soul

0 posted 2005-01-16 09:31 AM


Travelled smiles and answered stares
Have won my heart...

Roses delivered to your door
Affection you cannot buy
Comforting silence met before tears
Kisses you didn't have to ask for
Dinner I prepared under our stars
Shared between one soul
A whisper of sweet dreams
That melodic tune of the truth
Warm blankets for secure nights
A high no drug can induce
Unconditional love is my gift to you
Because...

Travelled smiles and answered stares
Have won my heart

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Haven't wrote in a while...not too obvious i hope. Peace and Love - Suede

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WinterWren
Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044
...Coming to
1 posted 2005-01-16 10:44 PM


I love this! It gives me a warm and fuzzy feeling. I like the beginning and how you tied it into the end too.
Great job!

If I could fall asleep tonight
you know I’d dream of you
and wake up wondering
why my heart is so cold
~WinterWren~

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