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Teen Poetry #7

I forgot

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2005-01-14 10:38 PM

I keep forgetting that I hate you.
The dislike is like the formented taste of mold.
Each minute that I remember conversing with you.
Wondering why the pain is begining to feel so old.

You trampled me,
and I suffocated.
It wasn't the end though,
it was just the begining.
Oh, how it was complicated.

I judged you from the begining.
But everyone knew the judgement was accurate.
Plain as day, simple as the conversation.
The torment, like an uncontrolable weed taking over a garden.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2005-01-14 11:13 PM

I love that.
I like how it flowed and even more what it said.

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