Teen Poetry #7 |
Thoughts Of You |
WranglrButts9 Member
since 2004-10-24
Posts 108Iowa, US |
Thoughts of You I sit in this room Thinking of you And also our time together That has come and now past My head is whirling Through every word you said, Ever move you took, I’m remembering, Every callus on you hands, Every freckle on you face, The smell of your clothes, The taste of your kiss. My heart is beating faster, Than I’ve ever felt before Everything I’ve thought about Causes my heart to speed up In this lonely body of mine. Thinking and feeling all of this, Makes me ache even more, And knowing I’ll never have you again Makes me want to give up all hope, But I’m not that kind of person I’ll keep pushing ‘till the end So while I’m waiting…. My head will keep whirling My heard will beat faster I’m doing all of this Because of my thoughts of you! Good judgment comes from experience, |
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SEA
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quick think of something else, like Math... before you pass out!!! great poem |
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WranglrButts9 Member
since 2004-10-24
Posts 108Iowa, US |
THANKS SEA!!! Lol, I thought of this last night after listening to a song I can REALLY relate to... Bailey Good judgment comes from experience, |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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ok now i gotta know...(if you tell me anyway- lol) what was the song??? |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
"But I’m not that kind of person I’ll keep pushing ‘till the end So while I’m waiting…." Ahh, I can certainly relate to those words so well. I'm not that kind of person either, though it may cause me all sorts of emo stress. I can certainly attest to feeling this way often, well, actually, most of the time for a good many years! A very awesome poem! Truly! -Rich Winamp Is Playing: "Blood (Empty Promises)" Papa Roach Getting Away With Murder "I am a part of the world that I hate/I wish the end would come faster, my world's a distaster," - Crossfade "Starless" |
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WranglrButts9 Member
since 2004-10-24
Posts 108Iowa, US |
Lol, I dont actually remember the name.... it was on the radio, thats all I know. Thanks!!! Its very rarely that I give up, and if I do, its only for my health, lol.... Glad you liked it. I need to fix a few spelling errors, but don't have time right now... Sorry! Bailey Good judgment comes from experience, |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Bailey! I love this (i always do ). But seriously this is awesome! |
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