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John B
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0 posted 2005-01-11 12:18 PM



Tears fallen on a winter day that met summer and said goodbye.

© Copyright 2005 John Nathan Booker - All Rights Reserved
peachesNcream
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1 posted 2005-01-11 03:32 PM


I'm not sure what to think of this but it's good either way! ~Jess

"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is to love, and be loved in return" -Moulin Rouge

Lexy
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2 posted 2005-01-11 08:08 PM


I know precisely what you mean.

HopelessRomanticGuy
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3 posted 2005-01-12 12:18 PM


*tilts head*  *scrathes back of head*  *is confused*  0.o;;

"I am a part of the world that I hate/I wish the end would come faster, my world's a distaster," - Crossfade "Starless"

John B
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4 posted 2005-01-12 04:54 PM


whacha confused bout. i'm fixin to give up on this forum so lets have a good ending
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5 posted 2005-01-12 07:33 PM


You're leaving! No!
lol...well i cant keep you here...wish you wouldnt leave though.

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

young_blood
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6 posted 2005-01-12 07:34 PM


hmmm....i would change the wording a bit. i liked the simplicity of it.
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