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Teen Poetry #7

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HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

0 posted 2005-01-06 09:28 AM

Why is it that no one cares
that no one's here for me
that no one seems to be there
for me in my time of need

I'm always there for everyone
but no one can be here for me
I need friends, but find none
Is it possible they just don't see?

How close to the edge I am
They just tell me that I'm fine
That melodramatic is all I am
Do they not see I walk the line?

No one can ever offer me help
though I give to them freely
This is the worst I've ever felt
But it seems that no one see's me

Or do they just not care?
Are they that cold?
That they can't be there
for those they profess to love?

Don't any of them even realize
that I'm down and not getting up?
That my hope's dwindling in size;
that i've drank all the life from my cup?

No, they don't see at all
and I can't say they care
For if they cared at all,
then there'd be someone there.

So I guess it's up to me
to find a way out of this
If I've got any strength left
to try and escape this abyss

But if I should fail to escape the din
I ask you to please remember me
and all I should have been
and how this came to be.

"I am a part of the world that I hate/I wish the end would come faster, my world's a distaster," - Crossfade "Starless"

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-01-06 09:45 AM

Hey whoa hey....I see you I hear you...you need to talk? Email me anytime!! I will listen and honestly care. This is such a heartfelt outpouring of lonliness...I know how it feels to give to others and feel like they don't ever give back to you, when you need them to the most...

I'm here if you want to talk about it.

WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

2 posted 2005-01-06 03:10 PM

*wipes the tears from her eyes*

*hugs you tightly*

I love you man!

Love always, Kirah

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2005-01-06 05:11 PM

This almost made me cry. Very emotional, well-put-together piece. I know where you're coming from.
You know Im always here for you. You can always email me anytime you feel down. That last stanza has me worried.

But Im comforted
by the fact that I can hurt inside
all I want to
without anyone ever knowing
~WinterWren~

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