Teen Poetry #7 |
The Right Choice... |
HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
I made the choice today to be other than I am To find another way to be other than a lamb I looked you in the eye and burned all I wished to say and looked away wondering why it's always me who walks away After all, my love was true. The only problem I had was that his was too and his luck was bad So again I smile and stand and with a grandious bow I'll wander away across the land knowing his time was now You'll never her my voice as I cry out in vain because the right choice is often that of pain. "and I searched your eyes for an answer |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
You'll never her my voice as I cry out in vain because the right choice is often that of pain. Wow...that's really true. Amazing job. Unfortunatly, you hit it right on the dot, most of the time, if you choose what is right, it has pain involved. At least that's what I've come to find. I really loved this, I hope you don't mind if I keep it? AIM-blueyed angel940 |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"because the right choice is often that of pain." Yep...that sucks doesnt it? Glad your back and posting again Rich! I liked this poem, although it's really sad, it's very nicely written! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
I really really love this. No one ever said that making the right choice would be painless. I actually wrote a poem about this a looong time ago. Yours is much better, and Im not just saying that. This one's going in my library. But Im comforted |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
Excerpt from a song: "You can take my breath away..." Awesome. |
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