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0 posted 2005-01-04 12:18 PM


Stars falling
to the ground
my heart drops lower
without a sound

misplaced memories
lost dusty pictures
moments of times spent
fading slowly into the mist

I miss you
My heart yearns for your love
everyday the yearn
turns into a hard tug

I loved you
now you seem not to care
when all i can do is watch you
walk away into the crystal clear

I need you
more than ever now
you helped me from the ground
but now i am again back down

I miss you
the words slowly fade away
I love you
the words grow softer each and everyday
I need you
Is just a wish upon the stars
and I want you
Was once before a cry
but now that you left me helpless
I am getting stronger
and i realized i dont need you to get by

Too late to cry, you're gone... why should I cry, you can't wipe the tears dry, so what am I to do? I need to be with you....-Me

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1 posted 2005-01-04 09:39 PM


"I miss you
the words slowly fade away
I love you
the words grow softer each and everyday
I need you
Is just a wish upon the stars
and I want you
Was once before a cry
but now that you left me helpless
I am getting stronger
and i realized i dont need you to get by"


seriously loved the end of this poem!!
awesome!

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