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Smoothy
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since 2002-12-02

Posts 119
The dark side of the moon

0 posted 2005-01-04 01:44 AM

What's the game you're playing at?
Saying that we can't go back,
Slowly now we drift apart,
Because of your un-opened heart,

I see you, and can't let go,
Feeling like I'm caught in tow,
Now I wish I could rewind,
Back to when you still were mine,

Now... I wonder why,
You felt the need to hide,
I'm begging, please tell me why,
You felt the need to say good bye

Smoothy
Member

since 2002-12-02

Posts 119
The dark side of the moon

1 posted 2005-01-04 01:53 AM

Well, it certainly has been a long time since my last visit. I hope that this first post after a long hiatus lives up to my older stuff.

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

2 posted 2005-01-04 11:20 AM

Welcome back "Smoothy." Glad to see your return to our presence. I hope you can stay with us this time. Now, onto the poem. Heh. You've not lost any skill for expressing emotion, though I suppose I knew this. Though I can't help but think this is one I read last night. Scrapbook work? Hope you post more of what you've got in there, because the finished ones I read were good. Glad to see you're still okay. That last romantic escapade had us, all worried. But this is good, it will help. And I can sympathize with your situation. Mine's not so different as you know. Anyway, it was nice to find that we three could reclaim some of the light from our fading glory days. I just hope we all keep in touch. And that I don't get lost on the way out to your house again! (^.^) Anyway, I'm glad you took my advice. Nice to see you again, even if you DID try to kill me at the door.... lol. We may change little things outside, but inside, we're all still the same. Hope it stays that way. Peace.

"I am a part of the world that I hate/I wish would come faster, my world's a distaster," - Crossfade "Starless"

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2005-01-04 08:08 PM

"Now... I wonder why,
You felt the need to hide,
I'm begging, please tell me why,
You felt the need to say good bye"

Wow...lots of emotion. You sure do know how to express your feelings!

Nice write Bryan . . . keep posting!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Smoothy
Member

since 2002-12-02

Posts 119
The dark side of the moon

4 posted 2005-01-05 07:11 AM

Rich- It feels good to be back, really. Glad to hear I haven't lost the old touch.

Alli- Thanks, poetry is really one of the few ways that I can truly express my emotions other than music.

"I hide myself behind them,
I put them on every day,
If you look you'll find them,
The masks I use to hide the pain"
~

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