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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
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0 posted 2004-12-29 11:14 PM


Balance 05-07-2003
Balancing sorrow with solitude,
silence with laughter.
Balancing then with now,
and paving the way for the future.

Taking life in stride,
with no time to hide.
Silent amongst the chaos of noise.
Empty of words,
here I balance.

© Copyright 2004 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17
Posts 495
LI, New York
1 posted 2004-12-30 02:16 AM


Hey Kellie-
          Man, I'm sorry I missed this one the first time around.  I really like this one.  Probably because it's close to where I am right  now.  I've finally regained a sort of balance.  It's not perfect, but it's a start.  Thanks for re-posting.  I needed to read this.  

"and I searched your eyes for an answer
and shuddered at what I found there;
as my skin shrunk away from conclusion
that you lacked the strength to

~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 544
in your dreams
2 posted 2004-12-30 11:22 AM


really enjoyed the reposts. thanks for sharing. you are an excellent author.
*Alli4000*
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3 posted 2004-12-30 07:37 PM


I wasn't around when you first posted this, so I'm really glad that you reposted it! Maybe I should go and read through the archives....
Anyways....great write! Glad to see that you're posting again!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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