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wvplayernotreally
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since 2002-11-06
Posts 215
yakima wa

0 posted 2004-12-24 08:48 PM



What would my christmas gift be?
To have you back
Just a simple request
that should be granted this night
I know I have one that is like you
but he can never match you
I need, I want my first love
I am unable to give him my heart
because you still hold onto it
even if you don't want it
you have it, you'll always have it
I know that I won't find you
underneath my tree
i know i won't find you at my door
your in my head, my thoughts, my dreams
If this be the night of miracles and hope
then you'll be mine forever

wow i obviously can't get over this boy

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broken627
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since 2003-11-26
Posts 66
Eugene Oregon
1 posted 2004-12-25 01:35 AM


that poem was really good i know exactly how you feel : : anyways but yeah your really pretty also~! have a good day and happy holidays~!
when there was so much left to say
you were soft-spoken
in the hardest way
endless waiting for those things,
you could never say
you always knew,
how to break my day

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
2 posted 2004-12-25 10:10 AM


I liked it, and I know how that goes....But...It's not always good to dwell in the past..There's probably a good reason he's not your boyfriend anymore...But if there isn't, I'm sorry. lol. Good write.

"Cuz I'm broken, when I'm lonesome, and I don't feel right when you're gone away..."~ Seether

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

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