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tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

0 posted 2004-05-10 09:17 AM

Let me Know what you think!

They say it won't work,
that our love isn't real.
Doubting our connection,
doubting how we feel.

They don't really know
the love we feel inside,
the love, so strong,
the love they can't divide.

My happiness grows
every time I talk to you.
You're always on my mind,
no matter what I do.

Every time the clock ticks
adding one second more,
you cross my mind
with you smile which I adore.

I would do anything
just to make you smile,
just knowing you're happy,
makes my day worth while.

You are my everything
the light of my life,
my inspiration in the morning,
the one in my dreams at night.

To feel your arms around me,
is a dream in itself,
feeling so safe and secure,
feelings I've not felt.

Without you to guide me,
I'm sure I'd lose my way.
I love you and thank you
for being there for me everyday.

-Erin

"If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!"
*~Erin~*

Rommance_Touch
Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 97

1 posted 2004-05-10 09:47 AM

nice work Tapper it touched me....

So wonderfull

~~Rommance_Touch~~
~~G_W_5~~

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

2 posted 2004-05-10 03:12 PM

Wow, I really enjoyed this!
Great Job!
Keep it up!

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

3 posted 2004-05-10 05:55 PM

wow..wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow,,i can keep going on forever if i can ..its wonderful cute,awwesommeeeeeeeeeeeeeee amazing...keep it upp

love and respect

I will do anything ,not to hurt you, who ever hurts you ,is my enemy until i die...

I DONT AGREE WITH LOVE ever in my life.But dont ask me why..

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

4 posted 2004-05-10 07:20 PM

Beautiful poem....

~Alli~

Don_Juan
Member

since 2004-04-08

Posts 252
Far from where I am going

5 posted 2004-05-10 11:26 PM

very nice. keep the good stuff coming

nice use of muffin

Snickers123
Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 94
United States-Iowa

6 posted 2004-12-23 11:19 PM

that was amazing, nice job.

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