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One_Love New Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 3 |
My eyes feel heavy, My body is weak. I can not hear, Nor can I speak. Death awaits, I know I'll go softly. Poison threw my veins, My temperatures dropping. Surrounding by pain, I've fallen on my knees. I rather not hear, I rather not breath. So many years, Lesson after lesson. Caring and loving, All leads to depression. Wanting to run, With no where to hide. But only facing, I’ll never be your bride. God gives us lessons. Don't question why? There are reasons for loving, Theirs a reason for goodbye. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Aww...thats sad.... I like this, the rhyming was great, and the message, though a sad one, was good too. I am definetly saving. Karissa I ask why, but in my mind, |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
The first three stanza were really sad. And this part... "God gives us lessons. Don't question why? There are reasons for loving, Theirs a reason for goodbye." like Karissa said, has a good mesasge in it. I'm also gonna add this to my library.  Merry Christmas!  Happy Holidays! |
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