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The fire cat... |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
Any word we ever say, or any action of the imagination never leaves us it is us and we become known for it. But there's boxes chalk full of new and shining prizes and we push them up around the old ones as we open them. and hope that the frenzied fire cat won't come to brush its tail along our face but it does just the same, he's a magic cat after all and torches all the new boxes, and we cry and we gasp and then we remember whats in the old box and we thank the fire cat and I rub his warm and purring chin. Because no one wants to forget and he knows this. So I tell him to come sleep at the end of my bed so I can start dreaming in the present tense. There's no reason I'm oversleeping |
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muchos Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 102 |
That was beautiful. Its nice to see poetic forms of writing without the dullness of rhyming all the time. it was truly unique and very interesting. It delivered a powerful message to me. thanks for the great read |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"So I tell him to come sleep at the end of my bed so I can start dreaming in the present tense." I liked that ending line. Great write Lexy!  Happy Holidays!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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