Teen Poetry #7 |
Now That I Have You in My Arms |
Strider612 Junior Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 46Alabama, United States of America |
I was in the falling raindrops Wanting shelter from the storm, Surrounded by the lightning, Seeking refuge safe and warm. In the middle of my wanderings, You found and rescued me. You’ve saved me from the darkness; Now at last the good I see. Feel the rain--it cannot drown me. Hear the thunder--it cannot harm. See the clouds--they cannot scare me Now that I have you in my arms. The winds that blew around me Kept my feet from steady ground, But now love's pull will hold me To the solid land I’ve found. And the rain that fell around me Made it hard for me to fight, But now I have a shield in you Whether storms come day or night. Feel the rain--it cannot drown me. Hear the thunder--it cannot harm. See the clouds--they cannot scare me Now that I have you in my arms. You’ve kept the storm from beating me By making me complete. I can face the world’s worst pain with you As rain falls down in sheets. Feel the rain--it cannot drown me. Hear the thunder--it cannot harm. See the clouds--they cannot scare me Now that I have you in my arms. See the lightning flash so near me, But I’m protected by your charms. The storm can’t overtake me Now that I have you in my arms. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I guess this is suppost to be a song right? I like it. This was my favorite part: "Feel the rain--it cannot drown me. Hear the thunder--it cannot harm. See the clouds--they cannot scare me Now that I have you in my arms." Great write...thanks for sharing! ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
The winds that blew around me Kept my feet from steady ground, But now love's pull will hold me To the solid land I’ve found. And the rain that fell around me Made it hard for me to fight, But now I have a shield in you Whether storms come day or night. Feel the rain--it cannot drown me. Hear the thunder--it cannot harm. See the clouds--they cannot scare me Now that I have you in my arms. I loved that part. I really loved this! I'm gonna keep it if you don't mind! AIM-blueyed angel940 |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
this was great. liked it a lot LOR you're the only one keeping me alive |
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