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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2004-12-15 04:25 PM

I’m slipping away,
Away to nothing,
Because nothing is what I have.

All I do is cry,
Cry and wallow in self-pity,
Neither helps...

There’s so much animosity here,
It’s all I see anymore…

“Why are you bawling THIS time?”
“She’s just throwing another one of her ‘fits,’
Because she didn’t get her own way.”

SHUT YOUR DIRTY MOUTH!
You’re stupid negative remarks,
They cut like razors in my skin.

I’d like to see YOU go through
What I’m going through right now,
And see how YOU react,
And how YOU handle it.
See if YOU want to die.
See if all YOU do is cry.

Expect me to be nice all the time?
HAH! I want to laugh in your face.
You’re lucky I’m as social as I am.

"Cuz I'm broken, when I'm lonesome, and I don't feel right when you're gone away..."~ Seether

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

I_dont_know_me
Junior Member

since 2003-12-08

Posts 48
UK, Cymru

1 posted 2004-12-15 05:48 PM

this is what im feeling right now kind of thanks for the read

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

2 posted 2004-12-15 11:06 PM

nice rant. i am not a fan of rants. hope all gets better with you.

wvplayernotreally
Member

since 2002-11-06

Posts 215
yakima wa

3 posted 2004-12-16 12:26 PM

this rocked. the way you put the "YOU"'s was very smart. thats everything i wish i could say

I can't be your superman

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

4 posted 2004-12-16 05:53 PM

hehe *nervous giggle* you remind me of myself!

loved reading it, made me kind of reflect on myself.

I wish I could be as honest and as upfront as you are!

yeah nice rant, hope it helped

love and empathy
sophie

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2004-12-16 06:37 PM

Yes! Ranting is good! lol. I like this...especially putting the YOU in bold!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

6 posted 2004-12-16 07:25 PM

Thanks everyone, ranting helps sometimes, but not always, thanks for the comments.

"Cuz I'm broken, when I'm lonesome, and I don't feel right when you're gone away..."~ Seether

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

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