Teen Poetry #7 |
You Made Me Realize |
AllThatGlitters4321 Junior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 45 |
"I'll always be here for you no matter what, you can count on me" Those words you uttered often I took them to heart, but why shouldn't I maybe i was to blind to see you were my closest friend i've relied on you since we were young and you've always known the feeling was mutual "..I'm here to the end".. to the end you tell me? Did you ever think it would be so near the night you left me, lying cold hurt needing help you left me that night maybe you don't think i would remember but clearly these words you spoke "She'll be fine, just leave her there let's get out of here before we get blamed" You do realize you were leaving me there to die No remorse, no second thoughts, it was that quick i realized what kind of friend are you? surely not one i need in my life that night you stabbed me in the back faster than i could blink So now i think back, what did you mean when i could count on you for anything the first chance you had to walk away from me when i really needed you you did but i stayed strong you see, i'm not going to sit here and cry that night i made it out alive it was are friendship that died. *It was just some thoughts i put together from a past experience. It definitely needs some improvement. Any way please tell me what you think Thanks For Reading! "Don't gain the world and lose your soul, wisdom is better than silver or gold." -Bob Marley |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
the first chance you had to walk away from me when i really needed you you did nice bit there. this poem was a sad and sorrowful poem, made my heart ache for you. great ending. i hope you've made better more trusting friends than this one. at least you were there for yourself. LOR you're the only one keeping me alive |
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