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AllThatGlitters4321
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since 2001-10-03
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0 posted 2004-12-14 12:09 PM


"I'll always be here for you
no matter what, you can count on me"
Those words you uttered often
I took them to heart,
but why shouldn't I
maybe i was to blind to see
you were my closest friend
i've relied on you since we were young
and you've always known the feeling was mutual
"..I'm here to the end"..
to the end you tell me?
Did you ever think it would be so near
the night you left me,
lying
cold
hurt
needing help
you left me that night
maybe you don't think i would remember
but clearly these words you spoke
"She'll be fine, just leave her there let's get out of here before we get blamed"
You do realize you were leaving me there to die
No remorse, no second thoughts, it was that quick
i realized
what kind of friend are you?
surely not one i need in my life
that night you stabbed me in the back
faster than i could blink
So now i think back, what did you mean
when i could count on you for anything
the first chance you had to walk away from me
when i really needed you
you did
but i stayed strong
you see, i'm not going to sit here and cry
that night i made it out alive
it was are friendship that died.


*It was just some thoughts i put together
from a past experience. It definitely needs some improvement.
Any way please tell me what you think
Thanks For Reading!


"Don't gain the world and lose your soul, wisdom is better than silver or gold."
-Bob Marley

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silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
1 posted 2004-12-16 08:48 PM


the first chance you had to walk away from me
when i really needed you
you did

nice bit there. this poem was a sad and sorrowful poem, made my heart ache for you. great ending. i hope you've made better more trusting friends than this one.

at least you were there for yourself.

LOR

you're the only one keeping me alive

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