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wvplayernotreally
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since 2002-11-06
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yakima wa

0 posted 2004-12-14 10:08 PM



You were what I always wanted
I never doubted that, or you
I was willing to give you everything
myself, my time, my heart and you took it
Sure, I knew you didn't feel the same
but I had you
You held me in your arms and smiled at me
I let myself fall for you more and more
then finally it came crashing down
I kept you from my boyfriend
I let all of this become normal
I couldn't feel when I was with you
I was on cloud nine
now I am in a cold dark cold room
with the only thing to hold on to
is my crushed ego, my broken hear
my tear soaked pillow
and you...your able to drive away
and not think twice
not break a heart
not lose your  most valuable possesion
i lost my self worth my identity
and the sad part is
with you...I would do it all over again

I can't be your superman

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AllThatGlitters4321
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since 2001-10-03
Posts 45

1 posted 2004-12-14 11:29 PM


I really liked this write. Sad to say but i've definitely been there before, keep posting hope to read more

"Don't gain the world and lose your soul, wisdom is better than silver or gold."
-Bob Marley

aussie teen
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
Australia
2 posted 2004-12-16 09:23 AM


this happened to me over the last three months... but i said right to his face, your not worth my tears, my love or my heart....
since then i havent looked back... all im sayin is be yourself... if someone doesnt like it they arent worth your time.. keep your head high  and a smile on your face.... you will feel amazing for doing it... you will regain everything you have lost plus more.. most likely his heart.... my only advice on that last bit is....... crush it into the ground and leave it there......
if you ever need to chat email me at chickkybabe@hotmail.com
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

*Alli4000*
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3 posted 2004-12-16 06:30 PM


"now I am in a cold dark cold room
with the only thing to hold on to
is my crushed ego, my broken hear
my tear soaked pillow"


I can relate to this so much...and I know it hurts.
if you ever wanna talk, feel free to e-mail me too.

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

tapper798
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since 2003-07-20
Posts 353
My own world
4 posted 2004-12-16 09:45 PM


wow I absolutly loved this.  I think it's cause I can relate...way too well. SOmething just like this happend tonight to me.  One of my friends hurt me really really bad and he was everything I wanted...and I was so mad and then I talked to him...and like u said here:   favorite part)

i lost my self worth my identity
and the sad part is
with you...I would do it all over again

I would do it all over again...lol sad but I would. I loved this, hope you don't mind if I keep it! nice write

AIM-blueyed angel940
One day u'll ask which is more important,u or my life. I'll answer my life and u'll walk away never knowing u are my life.

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