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wvplayernotreally Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 215yakima wa 
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You were what I always wanted I never doubted that, or you I was willing to give you everything myself, my time, my heart and you took it Sure, I knew you didn't feel the same but I had you You held me in your arms and smiled at me I let myself fall for you more and more then finally it came crashing down I kept you from my boyfriend I let all of this become normal I couldn't feel when I was with you I was on cloud nine now I am in a cold dark cold room with the only thing to hold on to is my crushed ego, my broken hear my tear soaked pillow and you...your able to drive away and not think twice not break a heart not lose your most valuable possesion i lost my self worth my identity and the sad part is with you...I would do it all over again I can't be your superman |
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AllThatGlitters4321 Junior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 45 |
I really liked this write. Sad to say but i've definitely been there before, keep posting hope to read more "Don't gain the world and lose your soul, wisdom is better than silver or gold." -Bob Marley |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this happened to me over the last three months... but i said right to his face, your not worth my tears, my love or my heart.... since then i havent looked back... all im sayin is be yourself... if someone doesnt like it they arent worth your time.. keep your head high and a smile on your face.... you will feel amazing for doing it... you will regain everything you have lost plus more.. most likely his heart.... my only advice on that last bit is....... crush it into the ground and leave it there...... if you ever need to chat email me at [email protected] Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"now I am in a cold dark cold room with the only thing to hold on to is my crushed ego, my broken hear my tear soaked pillow" I can relate to this so much...and I know it hurts.  if you ever wanna talk, feel free to e-mail me too.  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
wow I absolutly loved this. I think it's cause I can relate...way too well. SOmething just like this happend tonight to me. One of my friends hurt me really really bad and he was everything I wanted...and I was so mad and then I talked to him...and like u said here: favorite part) i lost my self worth my identity and the sad part is with you...I would do it all over again I would do it all over again...lol sad but I would. I loved this, hope you don't mind if I keep it! nice write AIM-blueyed angel940 One day u'll ask which is more important,u or my life. I'll answer my life and u'll walk away never knowing u are my life. |
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