Teen Poetry #7 |
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Miserable |
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WranglrButts9 Member
since 2004-10-24
Posts 108Iowa, US ![]() |
I’m gonna make your life miserable Just like you did to mine Broke down all of my feelings So I couldn’t speak I wanted to yell And I wanted to shout But my mouth had gone mute As much as I hate you I didn’t want to hurt you And I knew that’s what I’d do As short as we were friends I told you all my secrets And asked you not to tell How could you be so selfish? And so self-centered? Your voice felt like a splinter, Piercing each & every finger! A week has gone by Since I said those “hateful” words to you And we haven’t spoken, not one sound, Until this is what I heard: “It’s all my fault, And I don’t know how to say it, But I want our friendship back!” I don’t know if I want that, Are you just gonna stab me in the back? Say it was a simple hat trick? I trusted you before, And up until now, you never broke that bond, So I guess I’ll take a chance And see what this friendship still has Two weeks have past, Since we have gone back, And you finally asked: “You wanna come over tonight?” This isn't my best, but its new! Bailey Good judgment comes from experience, |
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*Alli4000*![]()
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Omg Bailey! I love this (haha i just told u this like what, 2 minutes ago?). But seriously, i bet you get like 15 replies to this! This poem rocks! I'm adding it to my poem book. Everyone who reads this: REPLY! ![]() Your the best Bailey! ![]() ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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WranglrButts9 Member
since 2004-10-24
Posts 108Iowa, US |
Thanks Alli!!!! But I don't think its THAT good! Lol, the last poem I wrote that u said ROCKED only got 4 replies, n I think 1 of 'em was mine..... so I dunno.... Bailey P.S. The other one was "Us (not what you think)" Good judgment comes from experience, |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
Your voice felt like a splinter, Piercing each & every finger! i loved this it "rocks" hee hee good write |
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WranglrButts9 Member
since 2004-10-24
Posts 108Iowa, US |
Thanks! That was my favorite part too! Glad you liked it! Bailey Good judgment comes from experience, |
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red_angel*16 Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 71 |
bailey i can really relate to this. i also had a frend that i thought i could trust. i told her everything because i thought i knew her well. then one day she started telling everyone about my secrets. but the only thing is that we never became frends again. i think this is one of the best poem i read from you so thanks for sharing keep posting!!!!!!!!! always christine |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Hey Bailey, Love the poem. Its also nice to meet you. I totally get where you are coming from and I know the feeling. -Kellie |
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WranglrButts9 Member
since 2004-10-24
Posts 108Iowa, US |
Thanks guys! Aprecciate the comments! Nice to meet you too Kellie! Bailey Good judgment comes from experience, |
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