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Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2004-11-29 12:46 PM

Air heavy,
weighted down by her presence,
crushing my deflated lungs.

Crushing my soul,
my heart, and joy.
Stealing my freedom,
creating panic and fear.

The stones she throws are weak,
and the words so strong.
and pain is stabbing at me like a sword.

Hurt and abandoned,
likewise, and sorry.
I want it to end.
possibly an apology.

All I want it my air back,
so my lungs can inflate.
I want my soul, heart and joy to be free.

-Anyone who reads this know I am simply stating my feelings and this is not intended to hurt anyone however if it does and a moderator deems it necessary to pull, I do encourage it. I don't want to fan any flames here I just want to express my emotions.

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

1 posted 2004-11-29 01:09 PM

quote:
The stones she throws are weak,
and the words so strong.
and pain is stabbing at me like a sword.

Hey Kellie,
We poets of all people, it seems, are most affected by words. I guess we're just open to verbal and literary communication, be it positive or otherwise. And I know I can't speak for everyone, but self expression is what I believe PiP is all about. You should feel free to express yourself here, and not have too fear flames. You are most certainly an excellent poet and I believe everyone here will have the utmost respect for what you have to say - I KNOW I do, - be it light or bent toward the darker side of life. Besides, as far as I can see, you've done nothing to offend. I see naught but a beautiful poem, written by a girl with much spirit.

-Rich

Winamp Is Playing:
"Burn (Acoustic)"
Mad At Gravity
Mad At Gravity

"I'm burning in the heavens,
and I'm drowning in a hell.
And my soul is in a coma
and none of my friends can tell,"
~Take Me~ Papa Roach

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

2 posted 2004-11-29 01:14 PM

Thanks

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

3 posted 2004-11-30 10:28 AM

you always write such powerful pieces.

punkrockerrobin