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WranglrButts9 Member
since 2004-10-24
Posts 108Iowa, US 
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Wow, I have no clue where this came from, but its really sincere, and I mean every word within every stanza and every line..... Why do they call it love, If they know it won't work out? Knowing that as the night passes, Their hearts are saying goodbye? Because its something our brain, Just doesn't want to hear. As the seconds passed, And minutes slipped away, My love for you grew deeper, Than I knew I could ever say. I told myself not to fall, But you made it hard not to, So I just kept going, Falling deeper & deeper. That time finally came When you said you had to go, But also "I love you!" Twas then I fell endlessly, Down that unknown, curvy road. That time has now past, And I think about it constantly Falling deeper with each thought Though it seems as though I can go no farther. Everything I do, think, see, or say Your name comes to mind With everything you said, Echoeing in my ears. I don't know what love is, Not entirely for sure, But when you said those powerful words to me, I sincerely meant them towards you, Although I knew you didn't! But if I knew this, And still know that now, Why did my love fall deeper, Without the coming battles Ever being told? I may not know what love is, But if its anything that it seems, Then I definately know, That I will fall deeper for you, With each & every passing day......... I don't have a title for this yet, so any suggestions would be aprecciated!!! This kind of came from a personal expierience, but the rest just popped to my head. I hope everyone likes it. Whether or not, please post replies! Bailey Good judgment comes from experience, |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
just don't think too much about it cause you'll only confuse yourself and don't be negative about it thanks for the read keep sharing |
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WranglrButts9 Member
since 2004-10-24
Posts 108Iowa, US |
I kind of understand your reasoning, but do you mind explaining why? Bailey Good judgment comes from experience, |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Hey Bailey. Love it. Deltitnu and all! -Kellie |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
First of all, your other poem that I said rocked already got 6 replies...I told you it would!  This poem is really good! And I'm glad that your posting again  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
just wondering why you deny that he is being truthful? it used to be that poems here in teen poetry would at least get 10 replies each there used to be a very strong bond amongst all the teens in here i hope to see that happen again and it seems like you're all headed that direction |
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WranglrButts9 Member
since 2004-10-24
Posts 108Iowa, US |
Acies: I don't think he was being truthful because after I left (I was on a little weekend vacation at a friends ranch) he never called. Then when I called him he acted like nothing had ever happened. If he sincerely meant those 3 words to me, he would have called & kept in touch. I just kept reminding myself that this guy was 5 yrs older than me, and had another life. Thanks everyone else for your replies! Bailey Good judgment comes from experience, |
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