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0 posted 2004-12-01 11:39 AM


i'm 18 i can't handle this
dialysis today rest tomorrow
dialysis again when will it end?

3 years passed by
same ole routine
but today feels different

i got a call
they found a match
my life will change
i havea second chance

i'm in the room
waiting for my turn
they come and get me
"Robin it's time to get get that new kidney"

i smile and nod
life will be better
goodbye dialysis
goodbye surgery
hello to a new life

i'm 22 and still going strong
the kidney saved me
and now i get to live again
so here i am to say
welcome to my life

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!
"and we'll all float on ok....." - modest mouse
aim - reklesabandnrckr
groove on sista!

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1 posted 2004-12-01 06:39 PM


Wow...I am just speechless. Heartfelt write...wow...made me cry (tears of happiness).


~Alli~

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2 posted 2004-12-02 12:43 PM


thankies :0)

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!
"and we'll all float on ok....." - modest mouse
aim - reklesabandnrckr
groove on sista!

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