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Teen Poetry #7

Trying To Pretend

AllThatGlitters4321
Junior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 45

0 posted 2004-12-09 03:44 PM

Trying to pretend
that i don't hurt anymore
but you've tore my heart in peices

What do you expect me to do
You told me you loved me
and this would all work out
i should have known not to be so naive
I'm stronger than this,
but you've got the best of me
I want it back

I'm trying to pretend
these could be tears of joy
I should be happy you are leaving
You've only brought me down
There is so much negative energy
when you come around

But i continue to love you
knowing you don't feel the same
You pushed me once,
instead of leaving i took the blame,
apologizing for something that
was clearly not my fault

I've got up the courage now,
i've got back my old self
I'm standing for what i beleive in
and now i want you gone

you see for a second i thought
you had the best of me
but this story has a different ending,
I'll open the door for you
because i am done pretending.

-Thanks for reading
*Please Comment*

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

1 posted 2004-12-09 05:43 PM

i absolutly cant believe that no one has commented to this yet... this has so much feeling in it!
laura

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2004-12-10 07:16 PM

"I'm stronger than this,
but you've got the best of me
I want it back"

These lines really stuck out at me...idk why. I know they're just "three lines of a stanza", but they just seem to have so much feeling in them.
Amazing write Megan...very expressive of your feelings...nice job.

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

3 posted 2004-12-11 08:03 PM

very creative concept. i like it!

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

4 posted 2004-12-12 08:36 AM

this is really cool... it sums up basically the last three months of my life... i love it... well done
i want to read more. keep them coming
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

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