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smalltownmind
Junior Member

since 2003-10-24

Posts 21

0 posted 2004-11-28 10:13 AM

more new stuff....

Life, You've destroyed me so I'm
giving up, i'm getting out
Time, You've forever changed me
so I'm going back, I'm rearranging

And I know this is the best time of my life
but with every year that passes by
i find myself looking futher back
to a time and a place where happiniess was strong
and my memories begin to fade away

Love, you've broken my heart
one too many times
Truth, you've shown me more
than i ever want to see...

And I know this is the best time of my life
but with every time i've told a lie
i find myself looking futher back
to a time and a place where happiniess was strong
and my memories begin to fade away

i remember saturday nights
and schoolyard fights
and all the things about home i miss
like back porch august nights
and my very first kiss...
responsibility was a joke
that only we told
and now it's all slipping away

Life, i miss you

"if you want me back...you're gonna have to ask."

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2004-11-28 11:28 AM

"Love, you've broken my heart
one too many times
Truth, you've shown me more
than i ever want to see..."

this is going in my library

excellent writing

smalltownmind
Junior Member

since 2003-10-24

Posts 21

2 posted 2004-11-28 11:37 AM

thanks... that makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside

electricxheart
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 184
far away from home.

3 posted 2004-11-28 12:38 PM

'i remember saturday nights
and schoolyard fights
and all the things about home i miss
like back porch august nights
and my very first kiss...
responsibility was a joke
that only we told
and now it's all slipping away

Life, i miss you'

couldn't have said it more perfectly.
this is exactly how i feel, beautiful
job.

-kelly

remember to breathe after you exhale.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

4 posted 2004-11-28 02:37 PM

"i remember saturday nights
and schoolyard fights
and all the things about home i miss
like back porch august nights
and my very first kiss...
responsibility was a joke
that only we told
and now it's all slipping away

Life, i miss you"

Wow. That part was great! I'm just speechless. Amazing write Eric!

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

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