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~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23
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in your dreams
0 posted 2004-11-28 12:02 PM

there upon the tree
is perched
the sparrow,
poised in stare
humble
and so modest
bird
beauty,
fine and fair.

but also
in the garden
there
a rose
is budding soon
how delicate
the lovely
lace
upon the freshest blooms.



~ the stuff dreams are made of ~
          

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2004-11-28 06:13 AM

very nicely done...

M
electricxheart
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since 2004-09-05
Posts 184
far away from home.
2 posted 2004-11-28 01:10 PM


very pretty

i like it.

-kelly

remember to breathe after you exhale.
Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2004-11-28 01:31 PM

Derrick~
This is truly a lovely write~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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