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this isn't good at all its just how i feel
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this isn't good at all its just how i feel |
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martina Member
since 2003-06-19
Posts 59 |
Will You Ever Be The Same The day you left my heart was broke. I thought I would never find greater. My life moved on always in the back of my mind was picture and name of you. I never spoke of you unless someone asked me to. It was not the same without you I seemed normal but there was always a piece of me with you. I didn't ever think I was going to see my best friend again. One day I was sitting with my family,they said you will never guess who is home? I have no idea your name woul be said I denied it for 2 years till one night I seen my best friend again. I could have cried we gave glanced we smiled but not a single word was said. Was it the way I looked? Was it the people around at the time? Or was it the attidudes changing so much we want nothing to do with eachother? I don't know but I do know I wish I had my best friend back. I miss him. He never thought he was better than anyone till he moved away. I just wish I had him back again. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Powerful writing and the emotions you must be feeling are incredibly expressed. Great writing, I truly enjoyed the read. Though it is such a shame that good writing must come from such heartbreak  Andrew |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I liked the "style" you wrote this in. The poem was beautiful, although it's sad.Keep posting Martina!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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