Teen Poetry #7 |
My "pips" |
~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
ere' body in the house jump, jump for joy. put ya hands in the air nod ya head, and make some noise. got mad flows bumpin. all my "pips" are tight. got rhymes, sublime lines. p.-i.-p. set it off right. im so proud to see these pippers representing themselves; re -veal- ing so free-ly the inner-being that dwells in the heart of the poet, with the power of words. showin love to peeps at passions. let your voices be heard. ~sweet dreams~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
nicely done |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
What Sea said.... ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
just a little word play. i like rap for all the rhymes. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Silly.. But fun Thanks dream I liked. |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
did you really? im usually more serious, but this was fun to write! |
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Savage Quiescence Member
since 2002-07-29
Posts 326Wandering |
Well done |
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