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AllThatGlitters4321
Junior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 45

0 posted 2004-11-27 12:21 PM

So here i am again..
back at square one
I'm trying to tell you this
but i can't find the words to say
I can't seem to figure out
Why it's gotta be this way
I know it wasn't my fault
I never let you down
I was there when you needed me
I was always around.
But you are acting unusual
when i see you in the halls
you act like you don't know me
You turn away when i call out your name
Was it something i've done
No it couldn't be
I was there everytime you needed me
I dont understand,
isn't that what friends are for?
I helped you out
when you asked i did what ever i could.
Is there something more?
I can't put this friendship back together
when i dont know why it's fallen apart
Just know that i'm always here for you
Like i've been from the start..

*Please tell me what you think*

I've known my friend for almost 4 years now, and just one day out of the blue she stopped talking to me, i asked her many times why, but she never gave me a straight answer. I don't think i did anything to her, i dont know what her problem is. so i wrote this little poem just to let her know.

Thanks for taking the time out to read it

Sweetest Sorrow X
Member

since 2004-01-19

Posts 146
From a cradle to a casket

1 posted 2004-11-27 01:05 AM

I can understand how this feels. You are a very gifted writer.

<3
Persephone

She would rather be dead than fat,
Dead and perfect, like Nefertiti

[This message has been edited by Sweetest Sorrow X (11-27-2004 01:36 AM).]

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2004-11-27 01:14 AM

"Was it something i've done
No it couldn't be
I was there everytime you needed me
I dont understand,
isn't that what friends are for?"

I get that. Like the other day my friend got mad at me and wont talk to me or tell me what I did. I mean, it proably isnt as serious as what you wrote about in this poem, but I can understand.

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

[This message has been edited by *Alli4000* (11-27-2004 01:46 AM).]

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

3 posted 2004-11-27 01:44 AM

quote:
So here i am again..
back at square one
I'm trying to tell you this
but i can't find the words to say
I can't seem to figure out
Why it's gotta be this way

I know this sentiment well, though in my case, it applies somewhat differently (see my thread "One Foot Out" ). This poem as a whole brings back many memories of my high school days. Sometimes people just change like that. It's horrible, but it happens. Great poem regardless! Hope you can resolve things.

-Rich

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"Pieces"
Hoobastank
Hoobastank

[center]"I'm burning in the heavens,
and I'm drowning in a hell.
And my soul is in a coma
and none of my friends can tell,"
[i]~Take Me~ Papa Roca

AllThatGlitters4321
Junior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 45

4 posted 2004-11-27 12:31 PM

Thank You All for your responses.

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