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red_angel*16 Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 71 |
I feel as we are drifting away because you changed so much that i hardly know you at all we use to meet and kiss goodbye but now you wont even say hi whats going with you? are we through with this relationship is this your final goodbye? because i dont think i could wait any longer i used to care for you so much that I thought this love will last. you told me you loved me and said you will never ever hurt me but if your words are true and deep you would tell me whats wrong so please give me an answer i dont want this love to end yet because I still care deeply for you but it might just happen if you dont tell me whats going on with you... |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Some great sentiments and good writing  Andrew |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"We use to meet and kiss goodbye but now you wont even say hi whats going with you? are we through with this relationship is this your final goodbye?" Yeah, this has happened to me. *sigh* it sucks. Just hang in there ok?  The poem was good, keep writing...as for the title, I'll think about it and let you know. ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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