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Teen Poetry #7

just a shortie!

~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

0 posted 2004-11-25 11:27 PM

Pinpricks in the ominous night,
twinkling,
sparkling,
glimmering sight,
high above the world in June,
wonderful siblings
of big sister moon.

sweet dreams

[This message has been edited by ~DreamChild~ (11-26-2004 12:34 AM).]

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2004-11-25 11:42 PM

woah...I love the flow to it.
nice. very nice.

There's no reason I'm oversleeping
dreamin' my life away...

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

2 posted 2004-11-26 06:24 AM

Very beautiful

Andrew

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2004-11-26 02:47 PM

Wow! I love this....very prettyful!

~Alli~

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