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Teen Poetry #7

Time's Spirals

Silent Evincar
Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

0 posted 2003-10-29 10:40 AM

For this moment my world is in a trance,
the still point of this minute is longed by years.

At this area of my world time has no affect,
the rapid decay of wasted seconds doesn't exist.

In these ever few spirals of silence I am free,
free to wallow in the riches of my life.

For all of this though, the minute will pass,
as so will my time with you.

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

1 posted 2003-10-29 11:55 AM

there are many poems that i have read on this subject
but this one leaves it underlying until the last seconed, good work and keep writing

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2003-10-29 12:34 PM

Very good poem, I really loved it.
Especially the last stanza, thanks for sharing.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

3 posted 2003-10-29 05:02 PM

time spirals....time spirals....why does that sound firmiliar?

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