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yet another song (innocent)
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yet another song (innocent) |
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smalltownmind Junior Member
since 2003-10-24
Posts 21 |
just another song...should be online soon... Innocent by small town mind remember when... we used to sing the same songs for hours over and over and over again never thought that would come to an end... remember when... you came to me when he made you cry and i held your hand on that late night ride it felt so right you always said we'd always be... just like that. Chorus: and i'd give anything just to be the shoulder you always cried on but nothing ever stays the same... now i'm crying along... with no shoulder to lean on and i guess i'm the one to blame remember when... we walked around the ballpark, just talking for hours nothing to say but we said it all anyway. i remember the way, your eyes they shined in the pale flourescent light, as we skated across that frozen floor i felt so safe in your arms. and i wish i could feel that way again... but we can't go back. Chorus: Bridge: i miss the way you laugh at me i miss the way you sing to me i miss the way you come to me when everyone is leaving me... i miss the way you hold my hand i miss the way you understand i miss the way you make me feel when nothing that i felt was real... i miss the way we danced outside i miss the way your eyes would hide but most of all i miss your innocence and i know we can't go back. "if you want me back...you're gonna have to ask." [This message has been edited by smalltownmind (10-29-2003 02:15 PM).] |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, even though this is a sad song, it's very beautful. I would like to hear the music to it. Thanks for sharing it with us.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Silent Evincar Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 179Here There and Places Between |
Hey I like it, bravo. It does have it's sad points doesn't huh?? Well I'm not one to complain about a good song. NJS Success is counted sweetest |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
This is so sweet without being too sweet, if that makes any sense at all and it is sad in spots too, I liked it and really want to hears some of your music ~*~Karen~*~ |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
never go back........never.... |
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magic_612 Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190NB, Canada |
wow that was really well done. Reminds me a lot of my best friend from High School. We were best friends all through Junior high, right up until grade 12. Then something happened and we just drifted away. We havent even spoken a word to each other since graduation night. and your totally right, you just can't go back. Thanks a lot for the read. |
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