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Sweetest Sorrow X
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since 2004-01-19
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From a cradle to a casket

0 posted 2004-11-21 10:21 PM


Tonight I expierenced death
for the first time this year
I felt horrible and useless
Even my sholder wasn't enough to cry upon.

Everyone fell apart.

The only mood felt tonight
was sorrow and lonleyness.

tonight for me was hell, but I knew it had to be done. Things like this make you respect your life that much more.
I wish I found some respect for myself.

She would rather be dead than fat,
Dead and perfect, like Nefertiti

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~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 544
in your dreams
1 posted 2004-11-21 10:30 PM


how very expressive.
touching.

Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
2 posted 2004-11-22 10:08 PM


I really like how straight forward you write.
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