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electricxheart
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since 2004-09-05
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far away from home.

0 posted 2004-11-21 08:01 PM



this is the

bottom.

of what you were expecting.

this is the

bottom.

of who you thought i was.

the oncoming secrets of winter,
sit heavily upon our shoulders.

you tell me that i should believe
you when the world comes crashing
down. i tell you your smile is my
only addiction tonight.

the tears are everyone’s poison.
(poison’s kiss).
so sweet, so curious.
vulnerable i am, vulnerable we are.

this is the

bottom.

of what you were expecting.

this is the

bottom.

of who you thought i was.


i could be an accident, but i'm still trying.

[This message has been edited by electricxheart (11-21-2004 10:16 PM).]

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Sweetest Sorrow X
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From a cradle to a casket
1 posted 2004-11-22 10:30 AM


I love reading your poems,Each poem I read truly is a work of beauty and self expression in itself.

You are amazing

<3
Persephone

She would rather be dead than fat,
Dead and perfect, like Nefertiti

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2 posted 2004-11-22 07:57 PM


Beautiful like always...if you had a book, I would so buy it!

~Alli~

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Lexy
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3 posted 2004-11-22 10:10 PM


I love that.
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