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Silent Echoes |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV 
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silent echoes all around the wind at my ear i sit in the stillness of the breeze the silent echoes fill my ears no one around nothing to be done nothing but sit in the silent echoes can you hear them? listen close you might they come out when you're still the silent echoes that is how they found me i do not know the silent echoes i just don't know hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt! |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Great work! This was awesome!  ~Jess  "The greatest thing you'll ever learn is to love, and be loved in return" -Moulin Rouge |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Robin- I read this and for some reason the lines echoed, when I read them. It was tripy but I liked how that experience added to the poem. It was captivating. I enjoyed the write.. how did you manage the echo to ring for the reader to hear? Brilliant. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
glad ya liked it thanks yall! off to utah i go for the weekend lots of love! hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
i like this robin...it's a mysterious kinda poem is a way... Have fun in utah!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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