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Teen Poetry #7

Why do you cry?

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2004-11-17 12:45 PM

Hold my hand,
   I'll go with you to a faraway land.
I wish I could understand,
   Why you wear that yellow rubberband.

Everyday you try,
    to cope, and then you cry.
Your tears I try to dry,
     with a simple emotional pry.

Plenty of love,
     with memories to share with a white dove.
A little shove,
      to put your hand in a matching glove.

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

1 posted 2004-11-17 12:54 PM

Wow.. a posting spree! A poetry bonanza!

Yeah, I understand the urge to help I get from this poem. That need to help others emotionally. Kudos.
-Rich

[center]"I'm burning in the heavens,
and I'm drowning in a hell.
And my soul is in a coma
and none of my friends can tell,"
[i]~Take Me~ Papa Roca

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

2 posted 2004-11-17 01:24 AM

something different than your usual style, perhaps a broadening of your techniques?

" Now what do you THINK about that? "

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

3 posted 2004-11-19 08:16 AM

i really didn't get it but nice write.
robin

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

4 posted 2004-11-19 12:55 PM

Hopeless- Yup, my muse has been very busy the last few days. But I do believe I am enjoying some of the fruit it is bearing.

Dream- You are so cute. Thanks. You really lift my spirits.

Robin- Thank You. This poem is a little weird and hard to understand. It isn't anything that can be explained. Just expressed.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2004-11-19 04:44 PM

quote:
It isn't anything that can be explained. Just expressed.

I get that...sometimes you write a poem that only you can understand.
Nice job on this one...(like always!)

~Alli~

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Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

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