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Kellie_Cantrell
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0 posted 2004-11-18 12:11 PM



A clock stopped it's typical rhythemic drone,
the numbers on its face clicked into place.
Time began and continued on,
clicking as each minute passes by.
Time. Eternity. Forever.
A clock, the numbers spin in delight,
destined to pass on by.
Seconds, minutes, hours, days.
Months pass before we meet again,
years are in our past.
The clock is always ticking,
and then it stops, frozen in time.

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~DreamChild~
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1 posted 2004-11-18 02:17 AM


boy that last line was a real show-stopper!

lol  

nice one.

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2 posted 2004-11-19 08:08 AM


very beautiful dear. keep on sharin.
robin

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Kellie_Cantrell
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3 posted 2004-11-19 12:59 PM


Thanks guys!
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4 posted 2004-11-19 04:42 PM


love this poem alot keellie! very interesting...enjoyed~

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