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Teen Poetry #7

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~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

0 posted 2004-11-16 01:49 AM

At the end of the river,
the moonlit mouth,
stars dance
on the wake of the sea,
and angels float
upon cloudy boats
on watery skies so deep.

maybe pt 2 ...  whaddya think???

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punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

1 posted 2004-11-16 11:50 AM

i thought of being on my g-pas boat fishing when i read this i dunno why lol. thanks for the read.
robin

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

2 posted 2004-11-18 02:44 AM

what is a gpas?

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

3 posted 2004-11-19 08:06 AM

*grandpa

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
"and we'll all float on ok....." - modest mouse
aim - reklesabandnrckr

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

4 posted 2004-11-19 01:06 PM

Faith, it moves mountains. I love this poem.

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