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earthdust
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since 2003-10-28

Posts 53
predestined and foreknown

0 posted 2004-11-12 02:30 AM

To Love is to Live,
and to Live is to Suffer.
To Suffer is to become Strong,
and to be Strong is to Survive.

To Survive is to Stand in The End.

I Will Love,
and I Will Live.
I Will Suffer,
and I Will be Strong.
I Will Survive,

and in The End, I Will Stand

" Understanding is more valuable than diamonds. If you can understand me, Then you are a very rich person. "

TY!

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

1 posted 2004-11-12 05:25 AM

nice one.... short sweet and to the point.... nice work... its something i know many people need to read..... well done this is beautiful and positive....
keep them coming..
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2004-11-12 06:20 PM

Like this...like auusieteen said, short and sweet! Thought provoking, in a way...

Nice job!

~Alli~

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Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

WranglrButts9
Member

since 2004-10-24

Posts 108
Iowa, US

3 posted 2004-11-13 12:01 PM

This was really good! I had to read it over and over again to really let it sink in. Tells me to stand up for what you believe in, because you don't live forever. You wrote it well!

Bailey

Good judgment comes from experience,
and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

4 posted 2004-11-13 04:00 PM

how very truthful....

Freedom is the dream of sleeping reality.
~DreamChild~

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

5 posted 2004-11-16 09:31 PM

hehe...

~Express Yourself~

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

6 posted 2004-11-16 10:06 PM

this poem almost equates lov with survival. that is a strong statement to make...

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

7 posted 2004-11-16 11:05 PM

damn right young blood... that is the exact expression i was tryin to relay...

when this life is over... love lives on.

~Express Yourself~

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

8 posted 2004-11-17 12:33 PM

"Damn right," is right! Kudos to you for being the first I've met to say this.

I agree totally. And what a way to put it!

-Rich

[center]"I'm burning in the heavens,
and I'm drowning in a hell.
And my soul is in a coma
and none of my friends can tell,"
[i]~Take Me~ Papa Roca

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

9 posted 2004-11-19 08:26 AM

"To Love is to Live,
and to Live is to Suffer.
To Suffer is to become Strong,
and to be Strong is to Survive."

that is so freaking true. i can say that is one strong part.
robin

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
"and we'll all float on ok....." - modest mouse
aim - reklesabandnrckr

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

10 posted 2004-11-19 01:04 PM

You are right, I know the feeling of love after death and it isn't easy. The poem was excellent.

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