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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Hello everyone! I'm Javier, that one moderator that isn't around so much, but no worries, I am lurking every now and then  I thought i'd contribute to the massive amounts of poetry that has been going on here since...A LONG TIME AGO. I haven't really contributed any of my work for, say, 2 years now (i think)...so enjoy. I wrote this one when I was a junior in highschool, I guess that makes this poem 5years old. But read and spit out those comments if you have them  Mistress of Rose Fields: "Mistress of Rose Fields, beware thy speech. Tis Whispering Meadows, a secret leach. Crouch down and speak, yet lightly still Thou dost not want a Meadow to thrill. Ever so softly grant me thy tale. Be slow, yet steady, my mind to fail. In left ear, not right. Tell me now, Whisper thy plight of where and how." Time elapsed, the tavern was cold. Mistress of Rose Fields, her secret told. Whispering Meadow lay in shock on floor Exclaiming, "Halt! Please stop, no more!" Yet still, she went on, and on she pressed. Meadow lay dead, in motionless blessed With eyes wide open, and mouth closed tight. His mind in fear, in fear of fright. Tears ran down Mistress cheek. Uttered a secret that made her weak. Fell to the floor in a weary spill, Yet continued on, no fear of kill. She finished herself with one, short phrase. Said it softly and within a haze, "Tis what happens when we blindly see, I turned my back on love, on thee."  "One good thing about music: when it hits you feel no pain"- Bob Marley |
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earthdust Member
since 2003-10-28
Posts 53predestined and foreknown |
i like this dopey dope. glad your still posting. always enjoyed your work, from way back lol! " Understanding is more valuable than diamonds. If you can understand me, Then you are a very rich person. " |
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Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I never thought I'd see you in here again |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Nice to see you posting in here again Dopey |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Dopey AND Acies(r)! Oh my! As always, Dopey, wonderful. I've missed you guys. |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
HeHe... Javi, Acies, and me... is it a miracle? LoL! Javi, Always loved your work, oh, and news... I now have a 13 1/2 month old son named Harvey. Have you ever heard that "No shirt, No shoes" rule? My question is...Why doesn't that rule include pants? |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
it's the dopester who never answers me on msn! lol beautiful pome deary i loved it. it's almost as beautiful as you RAWR! hahaha robin hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt! |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Funny- every single person who replied has probably already read this poem lol i didnt know any of you guys were still around....especially acies, i thought he died along with me. But yesh, I am here and there and everywhere. Occassionally glancing at what everyone is doing.....im still a Mod, aren't I?! lol anywayz- if anyone would like to hit me up sometime, feel free. But for now- i have to go to class. Check you all later folks "One good thing about music: when it hits you feel no pain"- Bob Marley |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hi Javier. I like it. <3 "How inimitably graceful children are in general before they learn to dance!" |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Wow, talk about a blast from the past  Thanks for the read Dopey, much enjoyed and then He created the horse... |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Talk about everyone crawling from the woodwork! :P Good read! |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
Wow.. I'm just a member but Have to say that this is the first poem I've read of yours and it was wonderful.. I hope to hear more from you!  Keep it up!!! ~Heather |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
PS-like your picture... ~Heather Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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