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suggestions please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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red_angel*16 Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 71 |
out of all the guy's I've met at school i cant believe your the one who captured my heart i never thought I'd fall in love with you because i always thought of us just being friends and nothing else i always get this feeling everytime i look into your eye's, a feeling that makes me want to smile, whenever I see your face all I want to do is make you happy idont know if you feel the same way but if you dont just remember I'll never stop caring about you each and everyday..... |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this is beautiiful red....... i know how you feel on this one only its from the other side ofthe window..... the only thing i can say is let him know how you feel...you will onnly find out how he fels if you tell himm how you do..... and dont be subtle... come out with signs and banners every where just to be sure he gets the message... any way back to the poem....well written... keep them coming.... Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
this is a very beautiful poem, as far as expressing your feelings! I think you would be an excellent poet if you could develop a style that is as unique as you are... what kind of poetry do you like?  Freedom is the dream of sleeping reality. |
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red_angel*16 Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 71 |
I mostly like love poems you could see that because mostly what I always write about is love |
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