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red_angel*16
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0 posted 2004-11-09 04:36 AM



in many different ways
that i hardly ever show
i have deep feelings for you
that know one ever knows

whenever you walk by me
my skips a beat
whenever I see you smile
i just begin to freak

when ever you get near
my heart begins to race
i get red and smile alot
just by seeing your face

hearing your name
forever makes me weak
so many chances we to talk
and I always forget to speak

so many feelings thats kept inside
that I could only feel
just remember that
my love for you is forever and true

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aussie teen
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1 posted 2004-11-09 05:44 AM


this is sooo beautiful......  your writing is always so heart felt and this one is no different...
i know how you feel and al i can say is it gets easier with time to open nup to someone with out looking like a complete fool
keep them coming...
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

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2 posted 2004-11-09 06:42 PM


"when ever you get near
my heart begins to race
i get red and smile alot
just by seeing your face"


Loved that stanza...i can realte to this poem so much.  I'm sure everyone has to go through this atleast once in their life.


~Alli~

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red_angel*16
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3 posted 2004-11-12 04:29 AM


thanks for your reply's you guy's
I wrote this cause I always have this feeling
whenever a certain guy captures my heart
so I took these feelings and turned them into poems.

~DreamChild~
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in your dreams
4 posted 2004-11-13 08:45 PM


how old are you?

red_angel*16
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5 posted 2004-11-16 05:24 AM


well dreamchild
your the first person who asked how old I am
well I'm 13 years old, gonna be
14 on Feb. 16

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