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red_angel*16 Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 71 |
in many different ways that i hardly ever show i have deep feelings for you that know one ever knows whenever you walk by me my skips a beat whenever I see you smile i just begin to freak when ever you get near my heart begins to race i get red and smile alot just by seeing your face hearing your name forever makes me weak so many chances we to talk and I always forget to speak so many feelings thats kept inside that I could only feel just remember that my love for you is forever and true |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this is sooo beautiful...... your writing is always so heart felt and this one is no different... i know how you feel and al i can say is it gets easier with time to open nup to someone with out looking like a complete fool keep them coming... Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"when ever you get near my heart begins to race i get red and smile alot just by seeing your face" Loved that stanza...i can realte to this poem so much. I'm sure everyone has to go through this atleast once in their life.   ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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red_angel*16 Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 71 |
thanks for your reply's you guy's I wrote this cause I always have this feeling whenever a certain guy captures my heart so I took these feelings and turned them into poems. |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
how old are you? |
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red_angel*16 Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 71 |
well dreamchild your the first person who asked how old I am well I'm 13 years old, gonna be 14 on Feb. 16 |
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