Teen Poetry #7 |
Fly Little Sparrow |
earthdust Member
since 2003-10-28
Posts 53predestined and foreknown |
fly high little sparrow with the pretty blue eyes as high as the sun that's set in the skies gracefully soar in your passionate way amongst beautiful clouds that watch over the day you're free and you're wild liberty's child then comes the winds fly little sparrow as fast as you can hurry and flee from the ravaging winds seek out your shelter from the thunder and rain hide from the storm that brings in the pain back to your cubby back to your den never get caught in the stormclouds again rest in the emptiness find comfort alone behind the cold bars safe in your home rest little sparrow alone in your cage safe from the chaos of the storms violent rage sleep little sparrow dusk will come soon then twinkles the stars then glimmers the moon " Understanding is more valuable than diamonds. If you can understand me, Then you are a very rich person. " |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this poem. I liked the last two stanzas the most, though. For some reason the ending of this little sparrow's journey appealed to me. Very good word. Keep them coming "One good thing about music: when it hits you feel no pain"- Bob Marley |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This is a very charming little poem. Thanks for sharing it with us. Andrew |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Love this! Very much enjoyed! ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
I liked "fly little sparrow" because it specifically outlined the journey. Good Write Smile |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
i liked the last lil part. was very well done. thanks for sharing. robin hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt! |
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